영어 작문했는데요.. 시험과 관련된 거라서 ..
영어 잘 하시는 분 문법 좀 다 맞나 좀 봐주세요.
이야기가 좀 낯 간지러운 거라서 부끄럽군요 =.=;
자신의 이상적인 일상에 대해 상상해서 쓰는 거거든요^^;;
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  At 7:00 a.m. I wake up to feel fresh air. I make two cups of coffee and wake my wife up
with soft kiss. After coffee we exercise together in our beautiful garden for an hour.
After our exercise, we have breakfast and go to our office where we work together by bike.
 At 9:00 a.m. we are with two of our best friends who work with our small office. All of us
work with joy and fun because we all are close friends. By 4:00 p.m. most of daily work
of our office is end up. Then all of us go to a small cafe near our office. We are the
members of a popular jazz band in the town. Our show begins at 5:00. We play soft music
there for an hour or more. Ending our show, my wife and I go home.
 In the evening we cook and eat together. We don't have to worry about cleaning because
we have cleaning robot. After dinner, we have our own time - watching movies, singing,
painting, etc. Sometimes we visit our families nearby.
 We go to bed about 11:00 p.m. but usually we fall a sleep somewhat later because we
have much to talk about.
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